Talk:Carpet Wizard (3.5e Prestige Class)

As an expansion of the progress I hope to primarily see more assistance here rather than edits to the prestige class itself. I know that some sections are incomplete and I will need help in where areas will be filled. Though if I find no assistance I might clear these areas out (IE quotes and NPC stats)

Overall I would like an opinion on my word choice and what needs to be done to balance the character. Suggestions to make for future characters would be greatly appreciated.

I hope I did a moderate job on this PrC.

Thank you for your help,

Dark-Ra

Rating

Balance - 3/5 I give this class a 3 out of 5 because it seems to be fairly balanced. I would suggest shortening the number of levels this class has down to 3 or 5 because going the full ten levels seems unnecessary. Also, why do I need to accelerate my carpet? Do I have a lance? Or how about some of the defensive stats, seems superfluous considering I can fly already.

Wording - 3/5 I give this class a 3 out of 5 because Too much text, needs to be edited down.

Flavor - 2/5 I give this class a 2 out of 5 because it needs more emphasis on flavor.

Saving Data

Moving this here:

Soothing Tongue (Ex): A 2nd level, a Carpet Wizard's loquacious linguist skills flow with the same fluidity as a fish parts water or magic parts reality. A carpet master gains a +4 magic bonus to all charisma based skill checks.

5th+2+1+4+4 +1 level of existing arcane spellcasting class
6th+3+2+5+5 +1 level of existing arcane spellcasting class
7th+3+2+5+5 +1 level of existing arcane spellcasting class
8th+4+2+6+6 +1 level of existing arcane spellcasting class

Coaldstone (talk) 17:35, 2 October 2019 (MDT)

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